We disappeared into the night

It was a dark and stormy night and we were out at sea going to drop out the cray nets at 2:00 in the morning. There  were 20 foot waves and we were only in a small 13 meter long tinny. The waves were curling over behind us, out of nowhere a wave came crashing on top of us and sunk us to the bottom. We disappeared into the night, we were trapped under the boat with no air then the boat hit the bottom. We were stuck at the bottom of the ocean with  know way out and no lights.

Was this the end for the boys?

One thought on “We disappeared into the night

  1. Hi Shaylah
    You have used the prompt really well for this 100WC . By describing the size of the waves and the boat you have painted a wonderful picture. Having the boat sink has set up a wonderful cliffhanger ending. Well done.
    Mrs P(Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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